TITLE: Drabbles of "Elle"
AUTHOR: Kannachan27
WARNINGS: blood, gore (?), insanity, abuse, torture, mind-fuckery, etc.
SUMMARY: Two minds, two people, one body. Two and two but one. Twitch. Elle. What...? And always, always, "Why?"
(Meet Twitch. And Elle. Get to know them. Now watch as I make you hate them. Wait, wait, wait... Now stop. I'll turn your world upside down.)
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Yeah. This is a post about my original story, Drabbles of "Elle."
Most of you--well, at least Nathan and Julia and Cassie--know that I love this story. And the rest may be recieving updates constantly about something by this name. Well...
I want opinions. I want to hear the opinions of more than two of my real-life friends; I want true opinions, to know what it is that people like, what is not liked.. how people are thinking things are going to turn out... Everything.
I want to know how someone thinks of this story, how it affects them... all that and more and... nobody tells me.
Julia faves and tells me to update, and once she said that a chapter scared her. But that... tells me a little, but not a lot. I appreciate it, but... I want more feedback.

And Karissa... she told me that she likes it. She talks to me about it in the... few minutes that we can talk. She grabs the pages out of my hand as I finish writing them, reading them and telling me to write more. she's about the only person that I know reading this that actually tells me her opinion on it, tells me and shows me what she likes, asks questions... all of that.
Well, now I'm asking if someone would read it. Read Drabbles of "Elle" and, if you could, leave me a comment. Even if you don't like it, that's okay. More feedback is better than none. And who knows! You might even like it!
Nathan: If you want to read this, be very careful. I'm not sure if you would be able to handle it, but... If you want to check it out, feel free.
Devious Comments
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
XD!!!!!!
XD j/k, but you spelled mai name wrong. DDD': [B-R-I-T-N-I-E, Got it memorized?]
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
Oh and by the way it's Karrissa.
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
HTML:</n>
Italics: < i>text you want italicised< /i>
BOLD: < b>text to be in bold</ b>
UNDERLINE: < u>text you want underlined</ u>
<s>Strike-through:</s> < s>text to be struckthrough</s >
And those are the ones that I use. Though, I'm pretty sure that dA doesn't support strikethroughs, which sucks. And, just take out the spaces between the <o>, okay? Cuz it won't work for bold if you use a broken HTML code like: < b>"DIE!!!",</ b> he shouted angrily at the monster, swinging his sword to meet the beast's unguarded neck.
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
There should be a dialogue box popping up to tell you to pick a title for the LJ-buvut, or something... And then, when you hit "accept" or whatever, the shaded area in the post is where the LJ-cut information (IE the story, really insanely long post, large picture, etc...) is supposed to go.
I know you're new at this, I'm still kind of new myself. OH!! Did you know that you can edit your posts?? Just in case you didn't, I'll tell you that you can! I do it all the time cuz sometimes things get pointed out to me in comments or something and I change them there and then instead of reposting it.... (And cuz sometimes LJ hates me. Or I want to change my icon. Most of the time because LJ hates me.)
And... I'm not sure how to tell you about the HTML codes... did you understand it from over lunch....?
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
I've got a suggestion, though: double space between paragraphs, so the text isn't all bunched together like it is. It'll be a lot easier to read double-spaced between paragraphs or whatever, like I write...
Also: LJ-cuts are a savior for the f-list. I was scrolling through my f-list a few times and I loked at your post and immediately thought: Large images and story-posts and that kind of thing should be under an LJ-cut... But Cassie probably doesn't know this, or couldn't figure it out. or something of the like.
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
Thinking better of it, I'd rather not expose that part on the internet. (Especially not with the people who I've got on my f-list on there... O_O I don't think that Dual should read that about me...! And I'm just not ready to tell anyone else.)
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
But this one wasn't a story. It was telling John something really personal. Something that I don't want to tell anyone, but I had to tell him. Cuz he asked and he kept pushing and pushing and pushing and wouldn't leave me alone about it, and he wouldn't. take. no. for. and. answer. So I told him something that only Juuchan knows, and now he knows a little bit of it, too.
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
You'd probably be bawling if I posted my "not right" explaination that I wrote for John... cuz I still cry when I read it, and I wrote the damn thing, and Ishould be used to it, but it's just... GAH.
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
And, yes, yes it is. I just got your comment too...
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
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