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Drabbles of "Elle"

Journal Entry: Sun May 18, 2008, 7:48 PM
  • Mood: Tired
  • Reading: "Crime and Punishment"
  • Playing: .hack/GU:v1
  • Eating: s'getti
  • Drinking: root beer
TITLE: Drabbles of "Elle"
AUTHOR: Kannachan27
WARNINGS: blood, gore (?), insanity, abuse, torture, mind-fuckery, etc.
SUMMARY: Two minds, two people, one body. Two and two but one. Twitch. Elle. What...? And always, always, "Why?"

(Meet Twitch. And Elle. Get to know them. Now watch as I make you hate them. Wait, wait, wait... Now stop. I'll turn your world upside down.)

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Yeah. This is a post about my original story, Drabbles of "Elle."

Most of you--well, at least Nathan and Julia and Cassie--know that I love this story. And the rest may be recieving updates constantly about something by this name. Well...

I want opinions. I want to hear the opinions of more than two of my real-life friends; I want true opinions, to know what it is that people like, what is not liked.. how people are thinking things are going to turn out... Everything.

I want to know how someone thinks of this story, how it affects them... all that and more and... nobody tells me.

Julia faves and tells me to update, and once she said that a chapter scared her. But that... tells me a little, but not a lot. I appreciate it, but... I want more feedback. :heart:

And Karissa... she told me that she likes it. She talks to me about it in the... few minutes that we can talk. She grabs the pages out of my hand as I finish writing them, reading them and telling me to write more. she's about the only person that I know reading this that actually tells me her opinion on it, tells me and shows me what she likes, asks questions... all of that.

Well, now I'm asking if someone would read it. Read Drabbles of "Elle" and, if you could, leave me a comment. Even if you don't like it, that's okay. More feedback is better than none. And who knows! You might even like it!

Nathan: If you want to read this, be very careful. I'm not sure if you would be able to handle it, but... If you want to check it out, feel free.

Devious Information

  • Current Age: 17
  • Current Residence: NY
  • Interests: manga, anime, writing, faeries, art, music, yaoi, much more.
  • Favourite movie: Moon Child, Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children
  • Favourite band or musician: Dir en Grey, Miyavi, An Cafe, the GazettE, the Dresden Dolls
  • Favourite genre of music: Jrock; Visual Key;
  • Favourite poet or writer: Kyo (Dir en Grey); Dualism
  • Operating System: Windows XP
  • MP3 player of choice: my beloved little 1GB SANSA (Thought it's too small and I need more space)
  • Favourite game: Kingdom Hearts, Final Fantasy, The Sims, Guitar Hero.
  • Favourite gaming platform: PS2
  • Favourite cartoon character: Belphagor, Gokudera, Tsuna, Hibari, Mukuro (KHR!), Momiji
  • Tools of the Trade: paper, pencil, pen, marker, sharpie. Anything I can draw with. Recently: GIMP

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~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Jul 17, 2008, 12:18:38 AM
lol. :heart:

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~XAzukiX:iconXAzukiX: Jul 16, 2008, 7:34:19 PM
I got it. I'm sorry. *starts tearing up*

XD!!!!!!
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Jul 16, 2008, 1:48:10 PM
...I don't know who this "Brittany" person is, but... she must be stealing my stuff. O.o I WROTE "Drabbles of Elle" DAMMIT!

XD j/k, but you spelled mai name wrong. DDD': [B-R-I-T-N-I-E, Got it memorized?]

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~XAzukiX:iconXAzukiX: Jun 24, 2008, 8:42:01 PM
Brittany you better keep writing "drabbles of 'Elle' "!!!
Oh and by the way it's Karrissa.
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Apr 4, 2008, 12:26:34 PM
kk!

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Apr 3, 2008, 12:34:44 PM
Ok..I will try it out and if I don't get it then I will tell ya!

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Apr 2, 2008, 6:31:55 PM
yesh. Sounds very good. Did you understand the LJ-cut thing..? And all that, cuz I'm not very good at describing things and instructing...

HTML:</n>
Italics: < i>text you want italicised< /i>
BOLD: < b>text to be in bold</ b>
UNDERLINE: < u>text you want underlined</ u>
<s>Strike-through:</s> < s>text to be struckthrough</s >

And those are the ones that I use. Though, I'm pretty sure that dA doesn't support strikethroughs, which sucks. And, just take out the spaces between the <o>, okay? Cuz it won't work for bold if you use a broken HTML code like: < b>"DIE!!!",</ b> he shouted angrily at the monster, swinging his sword to meet the beast's unguarded neck.


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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Apr 2, 2008, 6:20:30 PM
I kinda understood it...but between then and now...I forgot...(Terrible memory here!!) And ummm...I think I should try and edit my post to make it do that LJ thing your talkin' 'bout...sounds good huh?

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Apr 2, 2008, 6:17:44 PM
okay. Well, I can tell you sometime later, or maybe even show you... but, there's a little button near the size and stuff, and it's got a little squiggly mark... when you hover your cursor over it, a little thing should appear saying "LJ cut" or something.

There should be a dialogue box popping up to tell you to pick a title for the LJ-buvut, or something... And then, when you hit "accept" or whatever, the shaded area in the post is where the LJ-cut information (IE the story, really insanely long post, large picture, etc...) is supposed to go.

I know you're new at this, I'm still kind of new myself. OH!! Did you know that you can edit your posts?? Just in case you didn't, I'll tell you that you can! I do it all the time cuz sometimes things get pointed out to me in comments or something and I change them there and then instead of reposting it.... (And cuz sometimes LJ hates me. Or I want to change my icon. Most of the time because LJ hates me.)

And... I'm not sure how to tell you about the HTML codes... did you understand it from over lunch....?

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Apr 2, 2008, 6:07:30 PM
Yup...I have no clue even what that is...and I...um...will double space next time...I am still new at this kind of stuff...^^;

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Apr 2, 2008, 6:04:40 PM
I know; I read it. ^///^ (More like skimmed, really, but I still count that as reading since I picked up little tiny details and stuff... Even if it only took me a few minutes.)

I've got a suggestion, though: double space between paragraphs, so the text isn't all bunched together like it is. It'll be a lot easier to read double-spaced between paragraphs or whatever, like I write...

Also: LJ-cuts are a savior for the f-list. I was scrolling through my f-list a few times and I loked at your post and immediately thought: Large images and story-posts and that kind of thing should be under an LJ-cut... But Cassie probably doesn't know this, or couldn't figure it out. or something of the like.

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Apr 2, 2008, 5:57:59 PM
I know how that feels...just think about it. If its really that important...then I know you will make the right decision...and I actually posted something on LJ...I am so proud of myself!!

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Apr 2, 2008, 5:56:08 PM
^////^ Yeah... that's what I was thinking, too. But... I just wonder how many people I would actually show it to, you know? Even though I trust them, I'm still not sure that I would show a lot of people.

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Apr 2, 2008, 1:25:47 PM
Well then don't. Only tell the people that you trust! Silly...

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Apr 1, 2008, 8:52:56 PM
MM...yeah, me too.

Thinking better of it, I'd rather not expose that part on the internet. (Especially not with the people who I've got on my f-list on there... O_O I don't think that Dual should read that about me...! And I'm just not ready to tell anyone else.)

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Apr 1, 2008, 2:54:44 PM
Oh....ok...I see...I hate how he PUSHES people until he knows what he wants to know!!!

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Mar 31, 2008, 6:54:47 PM
yeah.....

But this one wasn't a story. It was telling John something really personal. Something that I don't want to tell anyone, but I had to tell him. Cuz he asked and he kept pushing and pushing and pushing and wouldn't leave me alone about it, and he wouldn't. take. no. for. and. answer. So I told him something that only Juuchan knows, and now he knows a little bit of it, too.

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Mar 31, 2008, 4:46:44 PM
I wrote a story that made me cry before, and I read it a few months ago, cos' I randomly found it and I cried! Those kinds of things really do bring out the emotions!!!

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Mar 30, 2008, 6:43:00 PM
ahh... ^^; Well, that seems to happen.

You'd probably be bawling if I posted my "not right" explaination that I wrote for John... cuz I still cry when I read it, and I wrote the damn thing, and Ishould be used to it, but it's just... GAH.

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Mar 30, 2008, 5:20:32 PM
Comment on LJ? Oh..um...your...um...post on LJ....um...it made me...um...cry...alittle....^^;

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Mar 30, 2008, 5:19:20 PM
lol. I know!

And, yes, yes it is. I just got your comment too... :heart:

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Mar 30, 2008, 4:01:18 PM
I knows that silly^^ I just think thats kinda..."not go together" funny. And I am reading your thingy...the "In which she posts something from a while ago" thingy...wow that was long!

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]
~gaara-sama-lover:icongaara-sama-lover: Mar 30, 2008, 3:58:57 PM
yeah. lol, but Miyavi isn't his rael name. Just a stage name. he doesn't seem to wanna give out that kind of information.

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"That I would be loved even when I numb myself
That I would be good even when I am overwhelmed
That I would be loved even when I was fuming
That I would be good even if I was clingy"
~Zexionlover666:iconZexionlover666: Mar 30, 2008, 3:51:08 PM
Ok....Lee....Miyavi Lee...I would have never thought...and I am on LJ right now...so after I finish replying to Kimmie's comments I will go check it out...I should post something huh?

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"If I should, even if I should disappear ahead of all of you, I will become the wind and I will always be together with you by your side" -Gackt International Dears [link]